Breathless

The night sky is black

Velvet covered in diamonds

And I am breathless

Inhaling the perfumed air

As I await your presence

©Kay Salady

Image: Starlit Night/Google.com

Tags: air, diamonds, inhaling, night, perfumed, velvet

About Kay Salady

I write about the greatest force on earth that, I believe, lives on forever and surpasses all else. "All your poems read like I am watching an artist use words instead of colours full of feeling." ~Anon.

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Arman Neyazi says : October 27, 2011 at 9:25 pm
Beautiful and very sensitive poem. It has the potential of making anyone Breathless. Congrats Dear Kay.

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- Kay Salady says : October 27, 2011 at 9:31 pm
  Thank you, Arman. I am flattered by your comment.
  
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  - Arman Neyazi says : November 1, 2011 at 1:15 pm
    Kay, you deserve more respect and LOVE. You are adorable. Accept my never ending love and respect
AJ Barlow says : October 27, 2011 at 9:49 pm
Awesome, you really painted the scene in such a short amount of words. Love the picture as well!

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ghosterb says : October 27, 2011 at 9:52 pm
Beautiful words Kay. I love your poem my friend and the feeling it describes. The picture is pretty awesome as well!

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thebardonthehill says : October 29, 2011 at 9:11 am
Loved the idea of velvet covered in diamonds!

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sharad pandey says : October 29, 2011 at 4:25 pm
lovely!!!

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Arman Neyazi says : November 1, 2011 at 1:12 pm
My dear poetess you have left me breathless.

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