My Heaven

Your eyes are so blue

Robin eggs could not compare

Nor the sparkling sea

Reflecting the azure sky

My heaven is in your gaze

©Kay Salady

 

Short Story Slam Week 12

Image Credit:   http://sweetestsin2862.wordpress.com/2011/06/18/happy-fathers-day/

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About Kay Salady

I write about the greatest force on earth that, I believe, lives on forever and surpasses all else. "All your poems read like I am watching an artist use words instead of colours full of feeling." ~Anon.

Posted on October 14, 2011, in poetry and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.

  1. Nothing compares to the love for a child. You captured that so well by your lovely tanka.

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  2. love the first two lines, well done.

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  3. :)))

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  4. Sweet & delightful … true parental love !

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  5. Very sweetly expressed, and I like the reference to robin’s eggs, unusual.

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  6. profound word flow.

    sugar sweet story.

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  7. excellent expression so well done and I love this prompt this week so many great expressions of love for this one
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/17/to-my-son/

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  8. It’s all in the baby-blue eyes. Captivating.

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  9. Innocence truly belongs to the child fresh born from heaven. -Kay Salady

    Thanks for all your wonderful comments! ♥♥♥

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  10. Lovely, Kay. Thank you for sharing!

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  11. some charming lines, heavenly beautiful.

    🙂

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