Goddess

Dec 14

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Divinity searches souls with eyes

So haunting that they paralyze

Open hearts of onlookers

With stunning captive stare

She gathers them in

To drink her wine

Of beauty

High with

Lust

©Kay Salady Poetry

 

About Kay Salady

I write about the greatest force on earth that, I believe, lives on forever and surpasses all else. "All your poems read like I am watching an artist use words instead of colours full of feeling." ~Anon.

Posted on December 14, 2011, in poetry and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 29 Comments.

  1. thingy | December 14, 2011 at 4:17 pm

    Very compelling. Love the image, too. : )

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  2. Elyas Mulu Kiros | December 14, 2011 at 5:17 pm

    Hey Kay!

    I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award.

    Please follow the link for more info:

    http://kweschn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/versatile-bloggers/ 🙂

    Congrats!

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  3. Life: Between the lines | December 14, 2011 at 6:43 pm

    is that a nonet?
    formatting is nice, pretty 🙂 happy rally!!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/15/nobody/

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  5. Liliana Negoi | December 15, 2011 at 3:44 am

    wonderful use of form 🙂 and aside the form, the content is simply gorgeous!

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  6. ManicDdaily | December 15, 2011 at 4:29 am

    Wow–the lust of a goddess sounds pretty cool. K.

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  7. Bupinder Singh | December 15, 2011 at 7:19 am

    the form, i loved it, and the words, i will remember them.

    http://bupinder21.wordpress.com/2011/12/12/puppets/

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  8. Morning | December 15, 2011 at 9:36 am

    perfect form and rhythms,
    well done.

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  9. tinkwelborn | December 15, 2011 at 1:34 pm

    poo! Nice piece here.
    eroticism following intimidation.

    good job on this one…I like it.

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  10. Charlie Parant | December 15, 2011 at 6:45 pm

    I liked both the form and the content of this one…nicely done

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  12. CC Champagne | December 16, 2011 at 8:22 am

    Thought the form looked strangely familiar… *giggle* Beautiful words, Kay! As always! Thank you for sharing your creative talent!

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  13. ZQ | December 16, 2011 at 10:18 am

    Sweet dreams.

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  14. Heaven | December 16, 2011 at 4:25 pm

    Nice nonet form and words ~ she looks stunning ~

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  15. terri0729 | December 17, 2011 at 11:59 am

    Kay, always such a pleasure to visit you and see what you have written. I loved it!!! Blessings, Terri

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  16. rosie@mygardenhaven | December 19, 2011 at 1:34 am

    Who is she, this lady of lust? You have sort of immortalized her, Kay!
    Rosie

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  17. danroberson | December 20, 2011 at 8:38 am

    Her stare drew me in,
    To all the warmth she had within,
    There I stayed for I knew I must,
    Overwhelmed and captivated by my lust.

    Your poem has great power, Kay.

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  18. LifeInVerse | December 23, 2011 at 10:17 pm

    Like only a true goddess can

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